The story has a lot of potential, but if I had to describe this book in one word, that word would be "boring".I wouldn't say that the book is badly written but there is way too much repetitions. And as if all the repetitions in the narrative part weren't enough Monica McCarty also felt the need to narrate dialogues or actions just after they happened *bang head*. I have to admit that all those repetitions bored me to tears. Unfortunately neither the hero nor the heroine were of any help here, because despite all their beauty and handsomeness they lacked consistency and I couldn't help but find them as boring as the way the story was told. Hopefully the next one will be better.